Friday, January 30, 2015

My Fictional story about mysterious places

Well OK as the title says this is fictional and is not real so don't believe it(just this story).
oh, and here is a duck. That's right.

Anyway this is a story about Tim, he is a kid who wanted more out of life. One day Tim had 5 bucks and decided to spend it on a lottery ticket, and then we all know what happened next. He didn't win and when he got home he remembered that he is a duck and has no sense of money and figured out why the cashier was staring at him funny. So after a long hard thought he DECIDED THAT... ooo look a potato bug... he decided that he wanted to go to many places. So with that he flew off from his tree...(that's right, a duck can live in a tree, quit being racist; if you judge a fish by whether it can climb a tree or not it will spend it's whole life thinking it can't)... and he headed to where ever that delicious smell of churros was coming from.

                    So when he finally landed in Poland in a strange forest. The trees were all crooked like hooks growing out of the ground. He then looked up at a sign and it read" Mysterious Crooked Forest,"but of course he can't read so he just waddled on. Then he noticed something so amazing that if you saw it you wouldn't be able to handle it. It was shining gold all around it while it was moving around the trees.That thing was... ooo look another potato bug... oops sorry looks like it got away well I guess you'll never find out what it was. I guess it's time for Tim the duck to go home. Well that was one fun adventure and hopefully we can do that again sometime. So hope you enjoyed my very fictional story about Tim the Duck, see you later.


  1. This story turned into the complete opposite of what I expected it to be. When I began reading this story I thought it was going to be a story about a boy and then I soon discovered it was a story about a duck. This is a very creative and imaginative story. I really enjoyed your piece, because it is very different from the other stories which makes it very unique and humorous as well. Keep up the good work!

  2. This story got me really confused. It is interesting on the other hand. I really like how you put that duck makes it a little funner to read. :D

  3. well first off you and Tim are mental and it's funny X'D